Comments on: My Collection of 16 Word Short Stories

By: Kristi Goldbeck

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By: heel lifts

heel lifts — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 00:24:42 +0000

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By: charlie

charlie — Fri, 31 Aug 2007 01:58:34 +0000

haha! personally, i like ‘em all. hope u’ll win, but if u were to win, i guess it’s the grandpa story that would be chosen. the others are creepy!

By: Izmir

Izmir — Thu, 02 Aug 2007 16:11:14 +0000

Damn, I should’ve submitted my entries too! But reading yours made mine feel like it could’ve been better. Well, maybe in the future, I’ll submit my writing. Yours were really emotionally stirring ones. Here’s to you winning it.

By: carrot

carrot — Mon, 30 Jul 2007 14:58:15 +0000

i like the third one about mixing work and pleasure :) good luck!

By: khailee

khailee — Sun, 29 Jul 2007 04:27:49 +0000

“testicle” is very arthouse haha

By: Mike

Mike — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 02:04:14 +0000

Good stuff. I had a hunch that you could not resist to have at least one story with the word “testicle.”

By: khailee

khailee — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 02:19:41 +0000

yeah i submitted these. thanks for the kind words frank! i hope the judges think like you ;)

By: frank

frank — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 02:17:59 +0000

I loved your stories. I thought they were very very good.

The first had me smiling, By the third story I was guffawing. To be fair, morbidity and irony is a really good mix.

I presume you submitted these? I hope you’d be shortlisted for the festival I am told there’d be six winners – a sixpack! :-)

Cheers//frank

By: khaiyong

khaiyong — Wed, 25 Jul 2007 10:06:59 +0000

i knew u would come up with something gay.